I made my first trailer - Terminator 2

I'm a screenwriter and figured that a great way to improve my writing would be to study trailers (the idea being that if I get a good feel for good trailers, I'll write movies that would make a great trailer, great trailers = box office success.)

So I studied a whole bunch trailers, cut up terminator 2 in adobe premiere, and wrote some music around it, as well as doing some sound effects.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5-stcgQQTsQ

I was wondering what you guys think of my teaser-trailer?